NPM #2: Oubliettes of Light

OUBLIETTES OF LIGHT, Lisa Ashley. MoonPath Press, P.O. Box 445, Tillamook, OR 27142, 2025, 73 pages, $17.99, paper, http://MoonPathPress.com.

What a pleasure for me to begin National Poetry Month with a blog-review of Lisa Ashley’s debut book of poetry, Oubliettes of Light.

An oubliette is a secret dungeon, accessible only through a trapdoor at the top. In these poems, we encounter multiple trapdoors, and we drop through them into dark, painful histories: the Armenian genocide, fragmented stories of violence handed down through the generations (along with family recipes, and a thirst for survival). A father provides for his family, and bullies and abuses his wife and children. A mother escapes into her flower garden, and into a bottle of Scotch. Lisa Ashley, the middle child of seven, escapes the family home in rural New York State, makes her way West, finds love and motherhood, becomes a chaplain working with incarcerated youth.

And, lucky for us, she eventually finds her way to poetry.

In my attempt to capture Ashley’s book in a quick paragraph, I had to ask myself, what makes me love this book? Why would I call it a pleasure? Why will anyone else love these poems? Let me walk you through my thought process. Consider these lines opening the first poem, “Grandmother’s Story Stone”:

I know no Armenian, she no English.
Like a pupil at attention, she sits
in her straight chair by the cookstove,
shuffles pages back to front
in her Armenian Bible. She mutters,
gnarled fingers rowing.

Several lines later we get our first glimpse of the poet: “I whisper behind my hand / scubbity, scubbity, scubbity.” How else to translate an incomprehensible past? What do you hear: scubbity. What do you see: “cotton stockings [as they] sloop / into ankle bracelets.” What do you smell: “garlic, olive oil, mint, her perfume.”

Above all, these are poems of witness. Necessary to the times we live in.

But, importantly, the poems in Oubliettes of Light are not trapdoors one falls through into darkness, they are not about trauma. These poems are about healing from trauma. They are about the solace one finds in a well-lived maturity. Not dungeons, but the unexpected doors opening above us into light. A child and a young adult taking in all that happens around her and processing it; a woman on a spiritual path of awareness and reclamation.

I Went Out to Hear

after Leila Chatti

I went out to hear
birdsong. Layered
in springtime air like icing
on cake sweet
clamor of joy,
praise song to life.
I hear the undertow of bees,
find one dancing
on the poppy’s green ball
in the arms of ivory pistils,
lavender petals ten times the bee’s size
wave a Victorian fan flirtation.
Standing stock still, eyes locked,
knees heavy with pollen, I’m lost,
beat fevered wings
willing to work
this singular moment forever.

—Lisa Ashley

Years of work—personal work on herself, and work on the poetry—went into the making of this book. It shows on every page. Because I know how late she came to poetry, and how seriously she has taken it, I asked Lisa to describe her writing journey. This is what she wrote back (with her permission, I have lightly edited and shortened it) — it’s a blueprint for the later-in-life poet:

I was 60 years old when I crossed the threshold from prose writing (journalism, marketing, academic papers, sermons) to poetry writing. I was an absolute neophyte. My fundamental love of learning was my ally. It was like finding a secret, enormous treasure trove. I had never studied poetry in college. I had never read poetry in any serious way. I was familiar with Mary Oliver’s work because her poems were used so often in Unitarian Universalist services that folks in the congregations referred to themselves as the “Church of Mary Oliver.” I liked her work and the few poets I had come across in the past: Robert Frost, Emily Dickinson, Shakespeare. I had no grounding in how to read and appreciate poetry, although I felt drawn to it. In 2014, after a sermon, a congregant invited me to come to her writing group. I knew her to be a kind person so I went. From there I began to take online classes and workshops, taught by excellent poets including Ellen Bass, Jane Hirshfield, Dorianne Laux, James Crews and Danusha Laméris. I joined a newly formed workshop group on Bainbridge and subscribed to on-line poetry venues that delivered a poem daily to my inbox. I was eager to learn as much as I could. I wrote many poems and began to submit to journals. I published my first poem in 2019. In May 2024 I submitted my manuscript to MoonPath Press, to the Sally Albiso Award contest. I was a finalist and was chosen for publication. I continue to read poetry every day, listen to poetry podcasts, and have committed to writing a poem a day for National Poetry Month. You could say I approach poetry as an immersive experience, and write poems to explore who I am, and to heal.

In closing, this is an inspiring book, open-hearted and encouraging.

You can find Oubliettes of Light at MoonPath, or through Bookshop.org. To see Lisa’s brand new (and lovely) web site, follow this link: https://www.lisaashleypoet.com.

image from All Trails

National Poetry Month: poetry book #1

Welcome to National Poetry Month!

If you are looking for a full rundown on what NPM is, skip over to https://www.napowrimo.net/ for a prompt a day and links to lots else. I also want to recommend Chris Jarmick’s blog, Poetry Is Everything. Chris, the owner of BookTree in Kirkland, Washington, will happily provide you with great quotes, prompts (daily in April!) and more links to poetry enthusiasts. I notice that rather than posting daily (as I believe he has in past Aprils), he is lumping the prompts into groups. If you are patient, you can find all of them. (And write 30 new poems!)

The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape of the universe, helps to extend everyone’s knowledge of himself and the world around him.”
― Dylan Thomas

I have a modest goal this month of sharing a poem a day from the pile of books beside my desk. Some of these I read in August during the Sealey Challenge. Others — well, it’s about damn time. I may not read a book a day, and I’m not pushing myself to do the usual blog reviews (though some may ensue), just this: one book, one poem.

Today it is Bones in the Shallows: poems from Mission Creek by Seattle poet Tito Titus. I reviewed his I can still smile like Errol Flynn (Empty Bowl Press, 2015) a few years back.

Tito Titus’s Mission Creek is located near Cashmere, Washington, and runs into the Wenatchee River. (Forgive me if I have any of this wrong.) As the title, Bones in the Shallows, suggests, the creek disappears every summer, drained by drought, by natural disasters, by greed. And in this slim book the creek, its creatures, and the people whose lives are lived on its banks are lovingly chronicled. Nature can heal us, Titus all but says, but only if we don’t destroy it first.

 

October coming down

How do you describe a creek?
Twenty cubic feet per second, the engineer said.

I toss a slender woody shoot,
watch it meander through ripples,
fouette through eddies,
dive from glittering rocks,
float toward the Wenatchee River —
a one-legged ballerina, dancing
toward the ravenous Columbia.
Past the equinox now, the creek
runs ten-feet wide, a few inches deep.

Still, no rain.

Now I know — in this parched tenth month —
how much water the upstream orchards
swallows when fish rotted on dry rocks:
enough to seduce innocent Coho
climbing freshwater reaches,
unaware of the Mission Creek murders
of their cousins, only a month before.

Twenty cubic feet per second,
enough to pretend the drought is done.

— Tito Titus

In “Last summer on Mission Creek,” we get a sense of all the beauty at stake:

Sumac leaves, stark and dark green,
wrestle summer winds.

Creek burbles play. Their watery laughter
climbs our woody bank.

And this poignant line: “My life becomes more beautiful than I knew, / and faster, too!” That’s nature’s power to renew itself, and our spirits.

Titus and his wife of 40 years now live in Seattle. You can find a copy of Bones in the Shallows at Edmonds Bookshop, or visit www.poetfire.com.

 

Western Washington Poetry Network

In January I traveled to Book Tree in Kirkland to attend a celebration for the launch of the Western Washington Poetry Network. It’s been around for at least a year or two, but this was the official “big deal” launch. Representatives from almost every writing group and open mike from Vancouver, Washington, to Bellingham to Duvall were there. There were cookies and wine. It was raucous good fun.

I was asked to speak about our poetry group—the only showing (so far) from Mukilteo—and, in part because I’m not sure we want new members, I talked instead about this blog. I told them how many poetry books I read in 2024, and how many book reviews. I invited people to take a look. I promised to promote WWPN.

And, as a result, I was handed several books by local poets. Like I needed more poetry books! (Of course I did.)

One of these was a coil-bound 5×8 collection with a tan cover bearing only the title, Five Oaks, and the poet’s name, all in lower-case: chris dusterhoff. I think chris himself handed me this book, but I’m not sure. I looked him up at the WWPN site, and found his name (again lowercase) associated with the 2024 letterpress anthology, The Examined Life.

Five Oaks was originally published in 1999 by Spankstra Press. This edition, the third printing, is from New Pacific Press, 2023. In the introduction chris explains an old goal to publish a chapbook a year, and that—in the midst of a too-busy year—he chose to unearth poems from earlier in his life. Some are from high school, some about his sister Laura (to whose memory the book is dedicated), some are about youthful traveling, “headlites glowed / & trees wept on the shoulder” (from “in subtle darkness”).

The poems are in lowercase and nearly free of punctuation (even apostrophes for contractions are left out), and occasionally include beatnik spellings (cupajava) or possibly misspellings or typos—who knows!—and even so I enjoyed  reading Five Oaks all the way through. It allowed me to glimpse a young poet testing the wheels on a new vehicle, experimenting with form and language and voice.

Yes, a few of the poems are long and as meandering as the journeys they depict:

into Bismarck over Missouri rvr
revisited
molten rvr of ice
11:45 am              out of Bismarck
through fargo, n.d. on borderline

           w/ the model for modeltrain depot

(from “Starting from Portland – Dec 1991”)

But even in these, in places, the language can turn magical: “leaves dance / a marionette jig… / with VanGogh pulling / the strings” (from “Vacation”). In another: “mystic paleblue morning / lavender / birdsong – what bird? / Portland city gray skycloud” (from “6:30 am September 2 ad 1991”).

So, I enjoyed reading Five Oaks and getting to know the young chris dusterhoff as he, a while back, “walked out / into applecore / days” (from “day of a hundred reckonings”). And if that isn’t a good reason to keep reading and sharing with you, I can’t think of any other.

getting to know the young chris dusterhoff as he, a while back, “walked out / into applecore / days”

 

Thanks for riding along with me. And don’t forget to take a look at WWPN. Maybe your path will cross with someone unexpected.

Bethany

PEACE, PEACE they say

PEACE, PEACE  they say, poems by Martine van Bijlert, Rainfed Press, 2024 (paper, $15.95).

Every February for the last six or seven years I have taken part in a postcard exchange for peace.

It’s somewhat informal. There’s no cost. A friend of mine runs the sign-up list and gets all our addresses straight. She calls it the Peace Poets Postcard Exchange. Which is exactly what it is. This year there are 5 groups—participants from numerous United States, and several other countries—each of us sending a postcard to 26 or 27 other people in the month of February, each postcard with an original poem about peace.

I think of it as a way to put more peace into the world.

In 2022 a Dutch mixed-media poet, artist, and writer named Martine van Bijlert joined our ranks. She is no ordinary participant, but has worked as an aid worker, researcher, and diplomat, mostly in Afghanistan. PEACE, PEACE they say is the extraordinary result of her three years of postcards. It is dedicated “to the peace makers” and in her introduction she writes:

As I sat down to write about peace, I kept turning to war, wondering whether I would stand out—a sender of dark collages and words that refused to sound upbeat. A poet who kept reaching for memories of aftermath and foreboding. (p. 3)

Having spent “a large part of [her] life surrounded by ripples of war” she found herself groping for the stock images. “Somewhere along the way,” she writes, “I lost the words.” It is a stirring and beautiful introduction, and ends with these words:

So we live. We can’t be overcome by despair and we can’t pretend [war]’s not there. We can’t keep calling peace what isn’t peace, but we also can’t disparage what is, or what could be, however insignificant it might feel. We should speak of it, even if we can’t find the words. Because we need to hear from people who no longer know what to say. (p. 4)

This is the first poem in the book:

and on this first day

I realise I know
how to write
about

riddled bodies
a whole country
in mourning

how to listen to
longing and people
who still dream

how to feel anger how to
watch the young their
eyes still shining but

I don’t know

where I left this
elusive thing

that was given to me
for safe keeping too

—Martine van Bijlert

The poems are sometimes tentative, raising hard questions: “is happiness always built on oblivion / and forgetting // always stacked on the bodies of the tired”; “listening // to a lone bird sing… / I woke to rain // wanting to know where I could  // learn a song / like that”; “can we talk about peace building // about saying bodies / and meaning institutions // saying agreement / and meaning a document.”

Some of the poems are hopeful, as if the poet can’t help herself (and I couldn’t read the following poem without thinking of Dickinson’s abashed bird in “’Hope’ is the thing with feathers”):

while I was away

summer swept in suddenly
rained down sun and coaxed out buds

bursting with impatience

leaves unfolding everywhere
shiny and tiny

and abashed
by their own brightness

—Martine van Bijlert

The 2023 poems are colored by the unexpected and “too early” death of a friend:

my friend died

and I’m not grieving

the books he’ll
never write

         but the hole

burnt in the fabric of time

the rooms that will
never get to greet

his stooped
frame

—Martine van Bijlert

I apologize for putting—in a review!—three entire poems, but they are so short, and I found the cumulative effect of them so moving. In this last one, the words “but the hole” stand alone in the poem, indented, set off by white space on all sides, a hole in the poem. The poet writes “I’m not grieving,” but we don’t believe her. The poem is made of grief.

I hope some of you will find this book for yourself. Her website is a good starting place: https://www.martinevanbijlert.com.

Or you can order the book by following this link: https://bookshop.org/p/books/peace-peace-they-say/5e8d047f184d048a?ean=9789083457406&next=t&.

As I write this I think of Gaza, Afghanistan, and the other 45 countries where the Geneva Convention reports armed conflict. This week marks the three year anniversary of Putin’s unlawful invasion of Ukraine. And there is our own deeply divided United States. As van Bijlert writes, peace belongs to all of us. So does violence. I wish for you the words you need to express all that you feel in this tumultuous year, and, despite the tumult,  I wish you bright moments pocked by peace.